Sunday, June 5, 2011

Jotting down the lost thought!!!

 '' Jotting down what my heart says...in erratic form, jumbled feelings, make me let go through my distinct healing. I provide my soul piece of my wind and here i am with my peace of  mind!!!''


Sunday morning, lying on bed. Looking at the ceiling expecting a big little change to happen. Trying to kill the memories which happened because of few defined moments. Feels like the world getting apart and the mysterious future haunting the consequences. Ray of hope seems to challenge the vision. empty mind with myriad thoughts, puzzled-blurred-intangible.


Coming on way to give the Lil hand to handle the state of oblivion. he thought, he would rewrite the lost faith but alas...destiny has other plans. And he is back to his shell with the door Lil ajar anticipating the spark to takes it way back lighting up the soul and getting bk the lost state of peace of mind. He rightly said....yesterday...when he assumed things r shaping up but it was just a alter reality.


Many would feel like him but the buried emotions need a way out. And here he taking that onus of being him again...his solitude taking a turn and he is bk to his mission to jot down the certain thoughts he feels and needs to be shared....

But waiting for the next morning not to be gloomy and the clear weather to somewhere with a smile stretching its hand to hug the oblivious entity.

Good Morning!!!
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15 comments:

  1. RupsaJune 5, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    it's Like an eternal change .Nature taste on human entity which brings an eternal transition through mutation.However the skill said is da gift that set apart from others which in a way succour him to return of oblivion......:-)

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  2. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    who is him???@rupsa

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  3. RupsaJune 5, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    some good phrase and wide application of ornamented words
    make of its sense most exceptional ..

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  4. RupsaJune 5, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    "HIM" is u da abhi

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  5. PoojaJune 5, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    i can imagine myself in place of HIM...lying on bed,staring at the ceiling expecting a big little change to happen,killin memories,empty mind with myriad thoughts,assuming things r shaping but they get worse...seraching different mediums to remove painful buried emotions...i have gone thru every bit of it....
    Many would feel like him:.. yes der r many who feel like us...n its amazing to c the spirit with which they deal this situation...life is a lesson on every stage... :)

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  6. PoojaJune 5, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    big applause for Mr Morpheus... for beautifully jotting down the struggle of indefinite minds in search of peace .... :)

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  7. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    @jerry i hate u huh. u r forcefully praising me:(

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  8. PoojaJune 5, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    huh dadu...how can u say that ... i took 30 mins to to read(5 times) n understand ur post...after dat took another 20 mins to think n comment on ur post... how can u call my 50 mins genuine efforts a forceful attempt..

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  9. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    well done jerry=))love u sista

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  10. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    It is a very deep thought that has been jot down, definitely a struggle of mind. It often helps one when they write down what’s in their mind. Hopefully, it helped you. Awesome piece of write.

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  11. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    thanks @anonymous. yes rightly said. struggle of thoughts indeed.

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  12. adi.rules159June 5, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    readin HIS thot...i realised ..how impt it is to see things frm HIS side ..get an inner view of his mind which is always shelled up within the solitude he enjoys so much .the "door lil ajar" does wonder ...lets out the the despair, the so called lost faith...or i wud say ..the negatives..not only for him..but also from within ..the people..who r close to him..whom he loves n cares uncondtionally ....thnk u ..for lettin people...peep in his mind .like its said ...a lot of darkness ...cannot stp the light ..coming out of a small deepak ..same way ...door lil ajar ...wont stop the hope coming in ...and making his all mornings gud. :)

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  13. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    thanks@adi. for trying to understand him :D. SOMETIMES his thoughts r misconstrued and conclusion is repulsive. but again...sometimes altered reality is important to be understood and not judged.

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  14. MorpheusJune 5, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    who are u @anonymous?

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  15. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 9:19 PM

    hi morph...i wish i cud write about my inner feelings as u do. my feelings have blurred with age but it was nice to get a glimpse of your inner self. a peace of advice from someone experienced in life.... work on it and don't let go of what u think is really important to u.
    may god bless u
    and......
    dd wants to see that door wide open.......so that u accept it all...:* dd aka deadly dudette

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